By Ashleen
Friday
After what felt like a long week at school, we were all pumped to know that the Queen's birthday meant a public holiday for all!
We, after eating our dinner went shopping.
Ah, Ah
I was yawning and it was not even half-past nine.
Saturday
On Saturday me and my Mum baked a cake, it was a Pineapple and Peach cake, it was very delicious. We were all sound asleep after watching t.v with Dad. We watched: ‘Alaska- The Last Frontier’ a TV series based on a family who live in Alaska, it teaches people about the rough lifestyle they have (hunting in the forests, snow-storms keeping them inside for months on end. etc,etc)
Sunday
Just as the alarm sounded I woke, this was something I surely dreaded.
I better get up I thought to myself, i’d been asked to assist with a riding lesson. I knew I couldn't be late. A couple of hours wasn't too EARLY don’t ya think! Turns out, I had got the times wrong. Finally, 3 hours later -literally.
After catching and tacking up the ponies we were leading 2 girls around the arena. The Queen's Birthday Weekend was nice and relaxing as we didn't do much.
The End
Ashleen, you need to work on making your ideas flow. You used complex punctuation really well and you had great ideas. Other than that this is a good piece. Well done!
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