Save the orangutans!
Do you know those shaggy reddish furry primates that swing through the tropical rain forests whilst eating juicy fruits? Orangutans are our lovable monkeys that are dying by the minute.
Orangutans are slow and steady creatures that move past life without a worry and have a good time! But there isn't much orangutans can enjoy thanks to us humans. We humans have upset the balance of nature and with that the wildlife has to pay for our doing. Orangutans population has gone down to 20,000 and 5,000 orangutans die each year! Which means within 10 years orangutans will be extinct if we don't act.
By Abby
Abby, I like your range of vocabulary in this cut-out from your text, but there is a sentence in this that doesn't make sense. I think you need to work on proof-reading your work regularly to check that everything is correct. I enjoyed reading your story.
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